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I can't stop thinking of you
I can't stop thinking of you
Day and night, rain or shine, you're all I think about
I stay up every night thinking of you
And wonder if you're doing the same
I can't stop thinking of you
I thank god every day for sending you to me
You're like an angel from heaven that fell into my arms
The minutes without you turned into days,
And the seconds with you flew fast.
I could only wish to see you more,
And make each moment last
As the days go by
I feel our friendship getting closer and closer
I don’t know if you feel the same way I do
But all I can say to you is
I love you, and I can't stop thinking of you
by Juan Manuel Pena
Comment
It has a very nice flow to it, and
very warm with a sweet feeling of innocence. I feel the thoughts and emotions very deeply throughout
his words and lines. Well written poem!
It has a very clear title, and very straightforward expressions; it is fast and easy to make readers feel what
he feels immediately.
Maybe he can add little personal touches of the one he
is thinking of, such as her eyes, hair, hands etc. then it will be
much more powerful ...
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